[projectaon] Re: Grand Master comment period [Books 15-20]
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Wed, 15 Aug 2012 10:12:24 -0700
On Thu, Aug 2, 2012 at 2:58 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 01/08/2012 23:53, Jonathan Blake wrote:
>>
>> On Thu, Apr 12, 2012 at 3:24 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> BOOKS 13-20:
>>>
>>> (er) The Story So Far: to destroy the fertile world of Magnamund have
>>> themselves -> to destroy the fertile world of Magnamund, have themselves
>>
>>
>> The current XML conforms to your suggestion in the cases of 14 and
>> 17-20, but don't have errata entries in the cases that I checked. Is
>> this always a change from the printed books or were some printed this
>> way?
>
>
> 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18: Original text actually has comma--oops!
>
> 19, 20: missing comma.
>
> 19: These champions of evil, who were sent forth by Naar--the King of the
> Darkness--to destroy the fertile world of Magnamund have themselves since
> been destroyed.
>
> 20: These champions of evil, who were sent forth by Naar, the King of the
> Darkness, to destroy the fertile world of Magnamund have themselves since
> been destroyed.
OK, I've standardized these and added errata entries where necessary.
Thanks for compiling the list.
> I can't recall if it's on the list you're working on, but we also need to
> discuss the changes made to Book 17 respecting increasing the instant-death
> chances for using the Sommerswerd in Xaagon. There was general agreement
> back when it was mooted, but we should ensure we're happy with the changes
> made before an official release.
Can someone jog my memory about these changes?
--
Jon
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