atw: Re: To press while... or hold?
- From: "bja" <bashley@xxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: <austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Mon, 16 Feb 2004 14:03:40 +1100
Probably the wrong way round Nigel.
"While pressing the Shift key, click on the RTU No. button" would be better.
Doing it your way might not work.
Also, if you need to detail this a number of times, it would be best to put
the process into a 'Conventions' section near the front of the document and
then use the abbreviated outcome ie Press Shift+<RTU No.> (with or without
the brackets).
Cheers.
Bruce Ashley
> -----Original Message-----
> From: austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
> [mailto:austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]On Behalf Of Nigel Dawes
> Sent: Monday, 16 February 2004 1:57 PM
> To: 'austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx'
> Subject: atw: Re: To press while... or hold?
>
>
> Thanks again, Sonja.
> I went with "while".
>
> ...Press the Shift key while clicking the RTU No. button.
> The blocksizes and options available for the specified RTU display, as
> illustrated below.
>
> Note: Pressing the Shift key while clicking the RTU No.
> button updates the
> parameters in the Options dialog for the specified RTU.
>
>
> Rgds
> Nigel
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Sonja McShane [mailto:smcshane@xxxxxxxxxxx]
> Sent: Monday, 16 February 2004 1:39 PM
> To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
> Subject: atw: Re: To press while... or hold?
>
>
> To me, when you press:
> * x and y, you press them both at the same time
> * x, then y (or x, and then y), you press one after the other.
>
> But to be totally clear (albiet more wordy), I guess it would
> be best to
> write something along the lines of: "To update all
> parameters, press Shift
> while [pick one: simultaneously/at the same time/also]
> clicking the button."
>
>
> A computer literate audience sure is easier to write for!
>
> It really comes down to Nigel's audience and the company style.
>
> Nigel, what did you end up writing?
>
> Sonja
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
> [mailto:austechwriter-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Naomi Kramer
> Sent: Monday, 16 February 2004 10:13 AM
> To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
> Subject: atw: Re: To press while... or hold?
>
>
> I'm not sure I got my point across. I admit I wrote and
> fired it off very
> quickly :)
>
> What I meant is... To my way of thinking, many users (esp. relatively
> computer illiterate) would take "To update all parameters,
> press the Shift
> key and click the button." to mean "press SHIFT, then click",
> whereas they
> need to keep pressing while clicking.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> Or maybe the shorter version:
> "To update all parameters, press the Shift key and click the button."
>
> Naomi says: I'd take that to mean 'press SHIFT, then click'.
> If that was
> what the sentence meant, then that would be how you would
> write it. But
> that's not what the sentence means, so it's OK as is, by me anyway :-)
>
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