[projectaon] Re: 28thos Comment Period

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Wed, 25 Jun 2014 20:03:12 +0100

On 25/06/2014 18:59, Jonathan Blake wrote:

On Wed, Jun 25, 2014 at 4:50 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

On 24/06/2014 23:47, Jonathan Blake wrote:



241: Assumes that GM is carrying a bladed weapon aside from their Kai
Weapon which isn't necessarily true if arriving from 106. I can't
think of a simple fix.


It's pretty invasive, but how about:

The Krakalla gives vent to an ear-shattering cry as your blade pierces its
evil heart. -> The Krakalla gives vent to an ear-shattering cry as you
mortally wound it. [so: Or, "...as you land the telling blow."]


What about "... as your blow stops its evil heart."?

This errata isn't a showstopper in my mind. Regardless of whether or
not we have a fix for this one issue, I need to start working on
publication in about three hours (9:00 PM UTC). If not then, I'll
probably need to wait until Monday.
True, that would be a smaller change, but I'm not convinced that 'a blow stopping the creature's heart' really works in the context of a fight. Sounds a bit 'Klingon nerve pinch'. 

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