[projectaon] Re: 28thos Comment Period
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Wed, 25 Jun 2014 12:50:35 +0100
On 24/06/2014 23:47, Jonathan Blake wrote:
I just finished my play through.
103: are inside the tent -> are outside the tent [all of the tactics
the GM uses are designed to make the enemy flee the tent]
(er) Fixed
229: Horses are a way for life -> Horses are a way of life
(ne) Fixed
241: Assumes that GM is carrying a bladed weapon aside from their Kai
Weapon which isn't necessarily true if arriving from 106. I can't
think of a simple fix.
It's pretty invasive, but how about:
The Krakalla gives vent to an ear-shattering cry as your blade pierces
its evil heart. -> The Krakalla gives vent to an ear-shattering cry as
you mortally wound it. [so: Or, "...as you land the telling blow."]
Even though you may arrive here from Section 106, the Krakalla's blood
could easily have pooled around the fallen Kai Weapon, so we could still
leave "Your face and tunic are spattered with its sickly orange blood,
and you quickly wipe your blade clean with a handful of grass before
sheathing it in your scabbard" unchanged.
Failing that, a footnote, which none of us really wants... ;-)
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Simon Osborne
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