[projectaon] Re: 28thos Comment Period
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon List <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Wed, 25 Jun 2014 10:59:39 -0700
On Wed, Jun 25, 2014 at 4:50 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 24/06/2014 23:47, Jonathan Blake wrote:
>> 241: Assumes that GM is carrying a bladed weapon aside from their Kai
>> Weapon which isn't necessarily true if arriving from 106. I can't
>> think of a simple fix.
>
> It's pretty invasive, but how about:
>
> The Krakalla gives vent to an ear-shattering cry as your blade pierces its
> evil heart. -> The Krakalla gives vent to an ear-shattering cry as you
> mortally wound it. [so: Or, "...as you land the telling blow."]
What about "... as your blow stops its evil heart."?
This errata isn't a showstopper in my mind. Regardless of whether or
not we have a fix for this one issue, I need to start working on
publication in about three hours (9:00 PM UTC). If not then, I'll
probably need to wait until Monday.
--
Jon
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