Well the adjective for Thailand is Thai, so Chai is probably a perfectly good adjectival form. Sent from my BlackBerry 10 smartphone. Original Message From: Simon Osborne Sent: Sunday, 22 June 2014 11:32 PM To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Reply To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: [projectaon] Re: 28thos Comment Period On 19/06/2014 19:22, Jonathan Blake wrote: > The time has come for the final push to publish the last Lone Wolf > book. Let's take the next few days to take a final look at The Hunger > of Sejanoz to catch any problems that we have missed so far. If > nothing else, please take some time to play it through and report back > any issues you find by June 24. We'll plan to publish it on June 25. > > Thanks to everyone for all the time you devote to Project Aon! > > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/28thos/title.htm > > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-less-simple/lw/28thos/title.htm > > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-simple/lw/28thos.htm The only issue I noted was that we've corrected the adjective "Chai" to "Chaian" in one place in tssf, but nowhere else. We should either reverse/reject this change, or enforce "Chaian" as the adjective throughout the book. The former is obviously an easier change, though I would lean toward the latter. Other than that, I didn't spot anything on the route I took through the adventure. -- Simon Osborne Project Aon ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon