[projectaon] Re: 28thos Comment Period

  • From: Anders Österberg <hyperborean111@xxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Mon, 23 Jun 2014 21:33:10 +0200

Section 70: "One splinter penetrates your boot leather and lodges in your
left foot". Shouldn't that be leather boot?

The Story So Far informs us that the Grandmaster's ranger buddies were
slain by Sejanoz in the last book. But section 219 in Vampirium says that
they were just unconscious. The narrator automatically assumes that they
were killed rather than taken captive. Is this a mistake, a revision, or a
plot point for future books?

Apart from that I'm wondering what the New Kingdoms are. They are mentioned
several times in the text, but they are never explained (unless I missed
something). Some kind of alliance, maybe?




2014-06-19 20:22 GMT+02:00 Jonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>:

> The time has come for the final push to publish the last Lone Wolf
> book. Let's take the next few days to take a final look at The Hunger
> of Sejanoz to catch any problems that we have missed so far. If
> nothing else, please take some time to play it through and report back
> any issues you find by June 24. We'll plan to publish it on June 25.
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