Well, he certainly did seem to have some trouble deciding what time of day it was. Hahaha! Evan ----- Original Message ----- From: Kim Friedman To: bookshare-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Sent: Thursday, June 10, 2010 9:21 PM Subject: [bookshare-discuss] Re: Some Amusing Bad Writing Hi, Evan, did my ears detect some kind of time distortion in that sentence? Regards, Kim. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ From: EVAN REESE [mailto:mentat3@xxxxxxxxxxx] Sent: Thursday, June 10, 2010 4:15 PM To: bookshare-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: [bookshare-discuss] Some Amusing Bad Writing Hi Folks, I'm submitting a BSO tomorrow of a book I just finished reading. The book is Runelords: The Sum of All Men, the first book in the Runelords fantasy series by David Farland. I am series captain for this eight book, (so far) series. It's actually a good book. Along with the conventional Fantasy elements, the author adds some imaginative ideas of his own and explores them in depth. The book also has greater moral complexity than a lot of Fantasy out there. But in my opinion, the writing could be better. Here is perhaps one of the best examples that might give some of you a chuckle: By evening the clouds blew out of the region altogether, and warmer air now suffused the night, almost as if it were any other afternoon in late summer. Evan __________ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature database 5188 (20100610) __________ The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. http://www.eset.com __________ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature database 5188 (20100610) __________ The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. http://www.eset.com