[bookshare-discuss] Re: Some Amusing Bad Writing
- From: "Shelley L. Rhodes" <guidinggolden@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: <bookshare-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Thu, 10 Jun 2010 21:25:40 -0400
Smile, that is a definite Bowler Litten type of writing. bad indeed.
Shelley L. Rhodes, VRT
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----- Original Message -----
From: EVAN REESE
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Sent: Thursday, June 10, 2010 7:14 PM
Subject: [bookshare-discuss] Some Amusing Bad Writing
Hi Folks,
I'm submitting a BSO tomorrow of a book I just finished reading. The book is
Runelords: The Sum of All Men, the first book in the Runelords fantasy series
by David Farland. I am series captain for this eight book, (so far) series.
It's actually a good book. Along with the conventional Fantasy elements, the
author adds some imaginative ideas of his own and explores them in depth. The
book also has greater moral complexity than a lot of Fantasy out there.
But in my opinion, the writing could be better. Here is perhaps one of the
best examples that might give some of you a chuckle:
By evening the clouds blew out of the region altogether, and warmer air now
suffused the night, almost as if it were any other afternoon in late summer.
Evan
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