[bookshare-discuss] Re: Some Amusing Bad Writing
- From: "Kim Friedman" <kimfri11@xxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: <bookshare-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Thu, 10 Jun 2010 18:21:13 -0700
Hi, Evan, did my ears detect some kind of time distortion in that sentence?
Regards, Kim.
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From: EVAN REESE [mailto:mentat3@xxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Thursday, June 10, 2010 4:15 PM
To: bookshare-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [bookshare-discuss] Some Amusing Bad Writing
Hi Folks,
I'm submitting a BSO tomorrow of a book I just finished reading. The book is
Runelords: The Sum of All Men, the first book in the Runelords fantasy
series by David Farland. I am series captain for this eight book, (so far)
series.
It's actually a good book. Along with the conventional Fantasy elements, the
author adds some imaginative ideas of his own and explores them in depth.
The book also has greater moral complexity than a lot of Fantasy out there.
But in my opinion, the writing could be better. Here is perhaps one of the
best examples that might give some of you a chuckle:
By evening the clouds blew out of the region altogether, and warmer air now
suffused the night, almost as if it were any other afternoon in late summer.
Evan
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