[bookshare-discuss] Re: Some Amusing Bad Writing

  • From: "Chela Robles" <cdrobles693@xxxxxxxxx>
  • To: <bookshare-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Thu, 10 Jun 2010 16:23:36 -0700

LOL! Oh wow! Whoa!
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  ----- Original Message ----- 
  From: EVAN REESE 
  To: bookshare-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxx 
  Sent: Thursday, June 10, 2010 4:14 PM
  Subject: [bookshare-discuss] Some Amusing Bad Writing


  Hi Folks,

  I'm submitting a BSO tomorrow of a book I just finished reading. The book is 
Runelords: The Sum of All Men, the first book in the Runelords fantasy series 
by David Farland. I am series captain for this eight book, (so far) series.

  It's actually a good book. Along with the conventional Fantasy elements, the 
author adds some imaginative ideas of his own and explores them in depth. The 
book also has greater moral complexity than a lot of Fantasy out there. 

  But in my opinion, the writing could be better. Here is perhaps one of the 
best examples that might give some of you a chuckle:

   By evening the clouds blew out of the region altogether, and warmer air now 
suffused the night, almost as if it were any other afternoon in late summer.

   Evan

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