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From: Scott Ferguson ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(??) 03tcok 350: You are the avenger of his crimes and it is you who cast -> You are the avenger of his crimes, and it is you who casts (??) 03tcok 350: Vonotar the traitor -> Vonotar the Traitor (??) 03tcok 350: in the brig the captain -> in the brig, the captain (er) 03tcok 272: cone of frost hurtles from its tip -> cone of frost hurtles from the rod's tip [sf: this prevents the pronoun 'its' from referring back to the 'mass of creepers' instead of 'the rod' which it should refer to ] (??) 03tcok 56: that unspeakable wretch has -> that unspeakable wretch, has (??) 03tcok 44: mystery to me, I -> mystery to me. I (ft) 03tcok 157: [sf: footnote needed instructing reader to erase Potion from Action Chart?] (??) 03tcok 157: at Ljuk' -> at Ljuk,'
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(??) 05sots 395: The stone surround -> The stone surrounding (??) 05sots 395: at large stone door -> at a large stone door (??) 05sots 331: pours over his charts -> pores over his charts (??) 05sots 302: the the velvet satchel -> the velvet satchel (??) 05sots 294: hastily staunch that bleeding -> hastily staunch the bleeding (??) 05sots 288: To Drakkar curses you -> The Drakkar curses you (??) 05sots 285: appears as it from nowhere -> appears as if from nowhere (ft) 05sots 223: [sf: remind reader that Crypt Spawn are undead and take 2x damage from the Sommerswerd?] (??) 05sots 140: the end of along aisle -> the end of a long aisle (??) 05sots 102: attached your belt -> attached to your belt
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Hi Scott
For Sommerlund and the Kai!
Kind regards,
-- Simon Osborne (on behalf of Project Aon)