[projectaon] Editor's Companion Submission
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From: Scott Ferguson <scfergus@xxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: 23:17:17 on Thursday, July 20, 2006
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(??) 03tcok 350: You are the avenger of his crimes and it is you who cast ->
You are the avenger of his crimes, and it is you who casts
(??) 03tcok 350: Vonotar the traitor -> Vonotar the Traitor
(??) 03tcok 350: in the brig the captain -> in the brig, the captain
(er) 03tcok 272: cone of frost hurtles from its tip -> cone of frost hurtles
from the rod's tip [sf: this prevents the pronoun 'its' from referring back to
the 'mass of creepers' instead of 'the rod' which it should refer to ]
(??) 03tcok 56: that unspeakable wretch has -> that unspeakable wretch, has
(??) 03tcok 44: mystery to me, I -> mystery to me. I
(ft) 03tcok 157: [sf: footnote needed instructing reader to erase Potion from
Action Chart?]
(??) 03tcok 157: at Ljuk' -> at Ljuk,'
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