[projectaon] Re: Comment period for 17tdoi
- From: "Thomas Wolmer" <angantyr@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Mon, 29 May 2006 01:44:19 +0200
I have made my first attempt to play through the book, which ended at
the Lavas on the Plane of Darkness, but since I don't have time to
have another go now, here's what I found this far:
(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: Shouldn't Mindfort be encoded as a spell (even
though it strictly might not be)?
(??) 17tdoi 57: Xaagon the Deathlord's city -> Xaagon, the Deathlord's city
(??) 17tdoi 64: There is a continuity problem here - you may have
arrived by another path than through the curtain of light.
(ft) 17tdoi 125: According to Section 6, the Kajarda *are* undead.
(ft) 17tdoi 169: We don't footnote what to do if you have no items in
those positions in these cases, do we?
(??) 17tdoi 220: Should "Weapon" be capitalized in this section? If
not, it should be decapitalized in a bunch of other places in the
books...
(??) 17tdoi 220: Can "Weapons List" be made into a link into the
Action Chart? And BTW, the heading there is just "Weapons", not
"Weapons List".
(ne) 17tdoi 223: See Mindfort comment on Improved Disciplines.
(??) 17tdoi map: Ixia the Hardlands -> Ixia and the Hardlands [tw:
sounds like a more likely map title]
--
Thomas
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