Thomas Wolmer wrote:
I have made my first attempt to play through the book, which ended at the Lavas on the Plane of Darkness, but since I don't have time to have another go now, here's what I found this far:
(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: Shouldn't Mindfort be encoded as a spell (even though it strictly might not be)?
(FYI It's not in italics in the book.)
(??) 17tdoi 57: Xaagon the Deathlord's city -> Xaagon, the Deathlord's city
Already fixed: http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/17tdoi/sect57.htm
(??) 17tdoi 64: There is a continuity problem here - you may have arrived by another path than through the curtain of light.
The only thing to do would be to footnote saying 'You may not have . . .', I guess.
(ft) 17tdoi 125: According to Section 6, the Kajarda *are* undead.
Already fixed: http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/17tdoi/sect125.htm
(ft) 17tdoi 169: We don't footnote what to do if you have no items in those positions in these cases, do we?
(??) 17tdoi 220: Should "Weapon" be capitalized in this section? If not, it should be decapitalized in a bunch of other places in the books...
The one in the footnote probably should be capitalised.
(??) 17tdoi 220: Can "Weapons List" be made into a link into the Action Chart? And BTW, the heading there is just "Weapons", not "Weapons List".
(ne) 17tdoi 223: See Mindfort comment on Improved Disciplines.
(FYI not in italics in the book)
(??) 17tdoi map: Ixia the Hardlands -> Ixia and the Hardlands [tw: sounds like a more likely map title]
Already fixed: http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/17tdoi/map.htm
-- Simon Osborne
