On Fri, Sep 23, 2011 at 5:13 PM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On 23/09/2011 22:54, Jonathan Blake wrote: >> >> On Thu, Sep 22, 2011 at 5:34 AM, Simon Osborne<outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> >> wrote: >> >>> If we want to change some, can we come up with a rough idea of what sorts >>> of >>> things we should leave as footnotes? For example, I think the footnotes >>> in >>> 79 and 242 look unnecessarily messy in the main body of the text as they >>> are >>> purely clarifications of a game mechanic. On the other hand, Mongoose's >>> solution to 145 and 314 are less intrusive than a footnote. (Not helpful >>> to >>> those of you who don't own the Mongoose editions, I know--sorry!) >> >> What are those solutions to 145 and 314? > > 145: Add "(In this instance, do not restore 3 ENDURANCE points as a result > of eating the Laumspur as normally would be the case. The dry leaves have > acted as an emetic and made you throw up, evacuating the poison in your > stomach.)" to the end of the first paragraph. In this case, we can strengthen our footnote by citing the Mongoose edition. > 314: Delete "You have not eaten today and now you must eat a Meal or lose 3 > ENDURANCE points." Change Option 3 to: "If you decide not to eat this food, > you must eat a Meal or lose 3 ENDURANCE points and turn to 178." I think we can leave this as-is. -- Jon ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon