[projectaon] Re: Comment Period for Lone Wolf 1-7
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 23 Sep 2011 18:23:09 -0700
On Fri, Sep 23, 2011 at 5:13 PM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 23/09/2011 22:54, Jonathan Blake wrote:
>>
>> On Thu, Sep 22, 2011 at 5:34 AM, Simon Osborne<outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> If we want to change some, can we come up with a rough idea of what sorts
>>> of
>>> things we should leave as footnotes? For example, I think the footnotes
>>> in
>>> 79 and 242 look unnecessarily messy in the main body of the text as they
>>> are
>>> purely clarifications of a game mechanic. On the other hand, Mongoose's
>>> solution to 145 and 314 are less intrusive than a footnote. (Not helpful
>>> to
>>> those of you who don't own the Mongoose editions, I know--sorry!)
>>
>> What are those solutions to 145 and 314?
>
> 145: Add "(In this instance, do not restore 3 ENDURANCE points as a result
> of eating the Laumspur as normally would be the case. The dry leaves have
> acted as an emetic and made you throw up, evacuating the poison in your
> stomach.)" to the end of the first paragraph.
In this case, we can strengthen our footnote by citing the Mongoose edition.
> 314: Delete "You have not eaten today and now you must eat a Meal or lose 3
> ENDURANCE points." Change Option 3 to: "If you decide not to eat this food,
> you must eat a Meal or lose 3 ENDURANCE points and turn to 178."
I think we can leave this as-is.
--
Jon
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