On Thu, Nov 3, 2011 at 2:27 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> "If you defeat Tower Guards 1 and 2" seems like the least ambiguous and >> uses less characters than the other alternatives (so unambiguity per >> letter ratio is higher). > > This was probably the worst, most ambiguous piece of wording in the whole > Lone Wolf series! Confusingly, when Joe says "the first round of combat", he > doesn't mean "the first combat round", but rather "the first of the two > combats". The confusion is compounded by the fact that each combat is > against two opponents. Gah! >_< If no one has good reasons not to, I'm going to go with Simon's suggestion: "If you defeat the first pair of Tower Guards...". > While we're looking at the footnotes...Jon, do you intend to add the > sentence "You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat." to the Equipment > section after "Remember that you can only carry two Weapons at once."? The > text is taken directly from the Mongoose editions. It affects all the books. Hadn't thought of it, but sounds good. > For whatever reason, I tended not to list the footnotes from the Equipment > sections for the books, so you might wish to review those when you implement > the changes for each book... I must confess that I haven't yet bought more than the first few new editions, so I'm working blind. -- Jon ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon