re: the mindblast/Mindblast/mind-blast: surely it still is the Basic Kai Discipline of Mindblast that is being referred to here? David (er) 235, 281: mindblast -> Mindblast [jb: These don't seem to refer to a Kai Discipline but to a generic blast of mind energy (e.g. "You launch a mindblast at the angry sergeant..."). I can't find any other similar examples in the books. Instead, how about "mind blast" in order to prevent confusion?] I know it's being picky, but would a hyphenated form 'mind-blast' be better? On 20 August 2013 11:00, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On 19/08/2013 22:27, Jonathan Blake wrote: > >> Here are all of the pending errata for Vampirium. I'll work on getting >> a good set of test editions out there later this week. >> > > Woo-hoo! > > Rejected what was to be rejected; Fixed what was to be fixed. With today's > addendum, that leaves just five unresolved issues. Brilliant!! :-) > > Just a few thoughts of my own. > > (er/ft) 45, 83: he will accept 1 Weapon, 3 Gold Crowns, and 1 Backpack > Item [lm: what if, for example, you aren't carrying a weapon?] > [jb: Good point. We could only suggest to the reader to make suggestions > according to what they think is fair, something like, "If you lack one or > more of these items, substitute other items of equal value."] > > Trouble is here, 'of equal value' could be ambiguous, since items are not > given monetary values. Can we succinctly explain that 1 Weapon = 3 GC = 1 > Backpack Item, so that if you are lacking something, substitute 3 GCs > --or-- 1 BI ? It'd be better not as a footnote, IMHO, but if that's the > best way of explaining this without detracting from the narrative... > > > (er) 47: [jc: This is a bit weird. Maybe sort out the chooses > ascending: 0-3, 4-8, 9] > [jb: Hmm, that is weird, but I can't say that's it's wrong either. > Thoughts?] > > Joe is here saying that for this particular RNT pick you want to pick low, > for some reason. I suppose there's nothing wrong with the list backwards, > so we could opt to leave as-is. > > > (er/ft) 131: You must now erase half of all the Arrows you carry, > rounding the figure up to the nearest whole number where appropriate. [lm: > are you to round up the half that you subtract or the total number of > arrows that you carry?] > [jb: Good question. I could only find a couple of other places where the > author talks about rounding numbers up or down (is my regex-fu failing > me?). Both cases (03btng:192 and 04wotw:125) were in the Grey Star books. > All cases that I found suffer from a similar problem. I tend to think you > should round the number of arrows lost, but that's just me. What would we > say in a footnoote?] > > For once, I have no real opinion in this matter! > > > (er) 219: [bk: To add another potential erratum, the random number > results in section 219 don't make sense. It's certainly understandable that > Assimilance would protect you from insta-death, but why should it lead on > average to greater Endurance loss? Should we make the order of the sections > 123, 300, 192, 254?] > [jb: ] > > We've left a similar instance alone in a recent release (I forget the > details...it was in Book 24 or 25 I think), and the EP loss is slight, so > I'd opt to leave this as-is. > > > (er) 235, 281: mindblast -> Mindblast > [jb: These don't seem to refer to a Kai Discipline but to a generic blast > of mind energy (e.g. "You launch a mindblast at the angry sergeant..."). I > can't find any other similar examples in the books. Instead, how about > "mind blast" in order to prevent confusion?] > > I know it's being picky, but would a hyphenated form 'mind-blast' be > better? > > -- > Simon Osborne > Project Aon > > ~~~~~~ > Manage your subscription at > //www.freelists.org/list/**projectaon<//www.freelists.org/list/projectaon> > > >