[projectaon] Re: 21votm errata
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Thu, 19 Mar 2009 12:36:51 +0000
Jonathan Blake wrote:
(er) The Story So Far: Darklord armies -> Darkland armies
agreed
Fixed in Books 21-27. What about the following occurrences:
01fftd: King Ulnar and the allies of Durenor broke the Darklord armies at the pass of Moytura and
forced them back into the bottomless abyss of Maakengorge.
02fotw: King Ulnar and the allies of Durenor broke the Darklord armies at the pass of Moytura and
forced them back into the bottomless abyss of Maakengorge.
09tcof: Several lands, after brief but futile resistance, had been overrun completely by Darklord
armies; others had surrendered
09tcof: They have heard nothing of the war in the north, and know nothing about the Darklord armies
that are poised to assault their capital.
09tcof: your defeat of Zakhan Kimah has turned the tide of war decisively
against the Darklord armies.
10tdot: Several countries, after brief but futile resistance, were completely overrun by Darklord
armies; others surrendered
10tdot: Your defeat of Zakhan Kimah turned the tide of war decisively against the Darklord armies
and paved the way
11tpot: Many countries were completely overrun by Darklord armies; others
surrendered without fighting,
11tpot: Your defeat of Zakhan Kimah turned the tide of war decisively against the Darklord armies
and paved the way
tmc: Kraan emerged from these terrible halls to swell the Darklord armies, securing victory after
victory
tmc: They possess strong psychic powers and often act as lieutenants in Darklord armies to control
Drakkarim regiments.
(er) Grand Master Disciplines: strength and capacity of these
fortresses increases -> strength and capacity of these fortresses
increase [LM]
(er) Grand Master Disciplines: Duration of the spirit-walk, and the
protection afforded to his in animate body, increases -> Duration of
the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his inanimate body
increase [LM]
(er) Grand Master Disciplines: number and accuracy of these
predictions increases -> number and accuracy of these predictions
increase [LM]
agreed
Fixed in Books 21-28.
(er) Equipment: and used in addition to two normal weapons. ->
awesome, but how are you holding the third weapon? your teeth? also:
weapons -> Weapons [LM]
Is this misleading enough to make a footnote worthwhile?
We could clarify this as per the Mongoose editions of the Kai books: "You may only use one Weapon at
a time in combat."
(er) Levels of Kai Grand Mastership: rank and titles -> ranks and titles [LM]
Gah! Fixed in Books 1-28!
(er) Kai Wisdom: Successful completion of previous Lone Wolf
adventures (Books 1-20) may be advantageous, but it is not essential
for the completion of this New Order adventure. [SD: Not advantageous
in the sense of having additional disciplines, items, etc. Remove.]
Perhaps: "Successful completion of previous Lone Wolf adventures
(Books 1-20) is not essential for the completion of this New Order
adventure."
Fixed.
More another day.
Good--I've made loads of changes with just those few decisions. This should makes the rules sections
easier/faster for successive books, though. I sincerely hope!
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Simon Osborne
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