[projectaon] Re: 21votm errata
- From: Jonathan Blake <blake.jon@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon List <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Wed, 25 Mar 2009 09:08:49 -0700
(er) 151: with finest silver -> with the finest silver [SD: or: with
fine silver]
I've heard it put this way before.
(er) 159: few miles to the north -> few miles to the south (cf. ref. 179)
[LM]
I don't follow the justification for this change.
(er) 159: Great Masourn mountain range -> ? Great Masourn Mountain Range
[LM]
I'm wondering how this is labeled on the map. (I don't have access to
it at the moment.) I note that we've made some changes to other
sections to make these the Great Masourn Mountains rather than the
Great Masourn mountains.
(er) 161: Rooms-2 Gold Crowns nightly -> 'Rooms-2 Gold Crowns nightly'
[LM]
I would further say...
message: Rooms—2 Gold Crowns nightly, -> message 'Rooms—2 Gold Crowns nightly',
(er) 163, 196, 256: orphaned section [LM]
[LM: Maybe link 115 -> 163 instead of 341.]
[LM: Make the RNT pick in 337 link to 196 and 256 as well (change the
2 options to 4)]
I'll revisit this when I can look into it more.
(er) 165: his crew attempt -> his crew attempts [LM]
agreed
(er) 172: crowns -> Crowns
agreed
(er) 177: one set are human prints, but the other set are -> one set
is human prints, but the other set is [LM]
agreed
(er) 178: you know, they insist -> you know they insist [SD: One comma
too many in this sentence]
OK as-is. There's no quota on commas. :)
(er) 179: A tangle of metal pipes and brass cylinders hang -> A tangle
of metal pipes and brass cylinders hangs [LM]
agreed
(er) 180: arrives there they hurriedly -> arrives there, they hurriedly
[LM]
agreed
(er) 188: Elder Magi who -> Elder Magi, who [SD]
OK as-is. No comma necessary to separate essential clauses from the sentence.
(er) 195, 289: the slaver; he can -> ? the slaver: he can [LM]
agreed
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Jon
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