[projectaon] 21votm errata
- From: Jonathan Blake <blake.jon@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon List <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Wed, 18 Mar 2009 20:26:28 -0700
(er) The Story So Far: Darklord armies -> Darkland armies
agreed
(er) The Game Rules: your number of -> your total of
I think it's OK as-is.
(er) Grand Master Disciplines: adventure. You -> (strike line break?)
[LM]
[so: The line-break is there in the published version. I see no
compelling reason to lose it.]
OK as-is
(er) Grand Master Disciplines: strength and capacity of these
fortresses increases -> strength and capacity of these fortresses
increase [LM]
(er) Grand Master Disciplines: Duration of the spirit-walk, and the
protection afforded to his in animate body, increases -> Duration of
the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his inanimate body
increase [LM]
(er) Grand Master Disciplines: number and accuracy of these
predictions increases -> number and accuracy of these predictions
increase [LM]
agreed
(er) Equipment: Random Number Table, your Kai Weapon -> Random Number
Table; your Kai Weapon [LM]
OK as-is
(er) Equipment: and used in addition to two normal weapons. ->
awesome, but how are you holding the third weapon? your teeth? also:
weapons -> Weapons [LM]
Is this misleading enough to make a footnote worthwhile?
(er) Levels of Kai Grand Mastership: rank and titles -> ranks and titles [LM]
agreed
(er) Kai Wisdom: Successful completion of previous Lone Wolf
adventures (Books 1-20) may be advantageous, but it is not essential
for the completion of this New Order adventure. [SD: Not advantageous
in the sense of having additional disciplines, items, etc. Remove.]
Perhaps: "Successful completion of previous Lone Wolf adventures
(Books 1-20) is not essential for the completion of this New Order
adventure."
More another day.
--
Jon
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