(er) 266 [x2], 340, 279 [x2]: weapon -> ? Weapon [LM] agreed (er) 268: The crowd roar -> The crowd roars [LM] agreed (er) 273: remain legible for thousands -> remain legible, for thousands [LM] [so: I prefer: symbols yet -> symbols, yet] Both commas should be present. That "for" is regrettable because of how it reads with "thousands of years". It could be replaced by a colon. (er) 275: leaving harbour -> ? leaving the harbour (or is this idiom?) [LM] OK as-is. (er) 275: [SD: Signpost details to be encoded in small caps.] Note that this is addressed earlier in the errata list. (er) 281: the remainder tend -> the remainder tends [LM] (er) 281: and clear -> and clears [LM] Both OK as-is. (er) 282: the learned sage the charge -> the learned sage, the charge [SD] agreed (er) 286: crowd immediately lose -> crowd immediately loses [LM] This is technically OK as-is, but it sounds so awkward to me that I vote to make the change. (er) 287: In fading light, -> ? In the fading light (or is this idiom?) [LM] OK as-is. (er) 287: one pair take -> one pair takes [LM] agreed (er) 290: disgrace and sometimes death awaits -> ? disgrace and sometimes death await [LM] agreed (er) 290: sparkling waters -> sparkling water [SD: To GM it is seemingly normal water; hardly Waters of Life, or anything like that] agreed (er) 291: leads to this room -> ? leads to a room [LM] agreed -- Jon ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon