[mea] Are you ok with this sentence?

  • From: cheri.frazer@xxxxxxxxxx
  • To: mea@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Thu, 12 Jan 2012 15:32:53 -0600

"Burke tore a vertebral artery, which are located in the neck and supply 
blood to the brainstem ? the back part of the brain which controls 
consciousness."

(From 
http://www.cbc.ca/sports/skiing/story/2012/01/12/sp-burke-skiing-injury.html
)

Would you consider that construction perfectly ok, a colloquialism / 
grammatical shortcut, or would you consider it wrong no matter what?

Just curious.
-C.




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