[projectaon] Re: Comment period for 1-7
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 02 Mar 2012 13:48:25 +0000
On 01/03/2012 22:18, Jonathan Blake wrote:
For The Chasm of Doom, we seem to have lost Dan Boulton, Kayvohn
Kazemi, and Ryan Marshall from the Special Thanks section. Was this
intentional?
No. Another artefact of trying to reorder the list, I'd guess.
All other changes to Book 4 seem good except for the one to Section 161.
'Run left when I say "Go",' whispers the face then disappears over the
edge of the wagon.
It just doesn't sound right. I think maybe the best wording would be:
'Run left when I say "Go",' whispers the face, which then disappears
over the edge of the wagon.
--
Simon Osborne
Project Aon
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