[projectaon] Re: Comment period for 1-7
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Wed, 22 Feb 2012 22:42:23 +0000
Hi Jon
Looked at the changes to Book 2. As a minor suggested alteration, how
about change the choice in Section 160 to read:
If you are carrying a Weapon and wish to demonstrate your Kai Weaponskill...
I think it sounds a little bit better, perhaps, maybe, but only a little...
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Simon Osborne
Project Aon
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