[projectaon] Re: Comment period for 1-7
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Thu, 23 Feb 2012 12:49:26 +0000
Hi Jon
just one final little nit respecting Book 3: Should the text added to
Sections 8 and 91 contain a comma after "Action Chart" thus--"(Note the
fact that you have applied Baknar oil on your Action Chart, though it
does not take up any space and only applies for the duration of this
adventure.)"
Other than this, I'd say Books 1-3 were now C O M P L E T E ! :-)
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Simon Osborne
Project Aon
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