[projectaon] Re: Comment period for 1-7
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Thu, 23 Feb 2012 10:36:05 -0800
On Thu, Feb 23, 2012 at 4:49 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> just one final little nit respecting Book 3: Should the text added to
> Sections 8 and 91 contain a comma after "Action Chart" thus--"(Note the fact
> that you have applied Baknar oil on your Action Chart, though it does not
> take up any space and only applies for the duration of this adventure.)"
I don't think the comma is necessary there, but I have changed
"though" to "although".
--
Jon
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