[Dennis: You guys are doing well with the scene, but I wanted to point out that Tina was standing outside the truck, not sitting in it. Aaron and Robb, don't worry about fixing that; I'll change that when I do the summary, just continue along.] Robb Neumann said: >>> Satisfied, the last guard looked up and spoke, saying, "The trucks' >>> look clean, sir." >>> >>> The lead guard raised his arm and the front gates into the compound >>> slowly rolled open. "Thanks for your cooperation. You're free to go >>> in." He gestured throught he open gate. "Follow the road to your third >>> right and head south till you reach warehouse Alpha-13. You can park >>> your trucks and start your parts aquisition from there." >> >> Rohgen turned to look at Tina, glowing purple with intensity in her >> seat. "Are you always gonna jump outta the vehicle whenever you see a >> guard?" Rohgen said dripping with sarcasm. "I guess its true, 'GRELS >> always deliver'," Rohgen said jokingly, knowing Tina would not >> appreicate his humour, but still expecting a laugh from the other >> occupants. > > Tina turned and nodded at Rohgen, maybe to signal that she heard him, > maybe agreeing that yes, as a matter of fact, GRELs *do* always > deliver. It was hard to tell just what that tiny motion meant. > > "Three intersections ahead, we can turn to the right, to find Alpha-13. > The guard has instructed us to start our search there," she finally > said. Carlie leaned forward. "Well, so far so smooth, eh?" She smiled at Tina. [...] ************************ Dennis D. Kirkpatrick Littleton, CO USA dkirkpat@xxxxxxxxxxxxx http://www.bluething.org ----------------------------------------------------------------------- This message brought to you by the HG-PBEM "OVERDRIVE" mailing list. http://www.bluething.org/overdrive/