On Wed, Jan 27, 2010 at 1:30 AM, Simon Osborne<outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
On 26/01/2010 19:07, Timothy Pederick wrote:
I also found these along the way:
(er) 16tlov 105: you choose not to dwell here -> you choose not to delay
here [tp: Or "tarry" or "stop" or any of numerous other synonyms;
anything but "dwell", which (notwithstanding the phrase "dwell on/upon")
I've never seen used to mean "stay for a little while", rather than
"take up residence"]
(er) 16tlov 105: give rise for concern -> give cause for concern [tp: Or
perhaps "give rise to concern"]
Both fixed last night, though I couldn't upload them until this morning.
I thought we were going to leave the "dwell" language as is.
