On 26/01/2010 15:04, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:
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From: Jan Charvát<ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx>
Date: 15:04:52 on Tuesday, January 26, 2010
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(er) 17tdoi 62: the grand arch begin to collapse -> the grand arch begins to
collapse
(er) 17tdoi 36: the grand arch begin to collapse. -> the grand arch begins to
collapse.
No, this is correct. The sentence reads: "You are within seconds of escaping when, to your horror, you see [1] the walls buckle and [2] the grand arch begin to collapse."
That is, you are seeing the grand arch begin to collapse, rather than just being told that it is beginning to collapse.
(ft) 16tlov 62: [jc: I think the footnote here is redundant. You cannot run out of money here. You have got 20 + random Gold Crowns in the Equipment Section, and the drunkard wishes only 10 GC.]
Are we going to remove this footnote, Jon? -- Simon Osborne Project Aon ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon
