[projectaon] Re: 27v comment period
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon List <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Wed, 25 Sep 2013 16:28:10 -0700
This is what I got from my play-through.
tssf: It just hit me that the order of how the story is told (i.e.
born MS 5063, becomes Grand Master, defends Kai Monastery in MS 5077)
implies that the player became Grand Master at 14-years-old at the
latest. Is this a correct reading, or should we reorder this passage a
bit?
equipment: For the record, I noticed that all of the bow illustration
by Brian Williams for books 9-28 was upside-down (shadowing looked
kind of silly once I noticed it). Corrected in svn repository.
132: head They -> head. They
170: the Eye of Lhaz -> an Eye of Lhaz
There seems to be more than one Eye of Lhaz: one from 22tbos section
156 and one from 167.
272: BEHNAZ—70 miles -> <signpost>BEHNAZ—70 MILES</signpost>
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Jon
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