[projectaon] Re: 27v comment period
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: Project Aon List <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Sat, 28 Sep 2013 12:50:48 -0700
On Sat, Sep 28, 2013 at 1:18 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 26/09/2013 00:28, Jonathan Blake wrote:
>>
>> tssf: It just hit me that the order of how the story is told (i.e.
>> born MS 5063, becomes Grand Master, defends Kai Monastery in MS 5077)
>> implies that the player became Grand Master at 14-years-old at the
>> latest. Is this a correct reading, or should we reorder this passage a
>> bit?
>
>
> I'm not that bothered by this, but we could amend "In the year MS 5077 you
> skill and courage" to something like "In the year MS 5077, while still
> training to become a Grand Master, you skill and courage".
Let's just leave this alone for now. It's not a big issue.
Thanks for checking the rest, Simon.
--
Jon
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