Hi Jon and co, Please find comments below: 1. As for section 130, which I suggested about Eye of Lhaz, it would be great to put a footnote plainly because many of those who played the series starting from Book 21 may have forgotten that they have picked it up during the Buccaneers of Shadaki. 2. In Game Rules section, you may have remembered there's a paragraph that was like this in the Grand Master series: *However, only the following Special Items may be carried over from the Lone Wolf Kai (Books 1–5) and Magnakai (Books 6–12) series to the Lone Wolf Grand Master series (Books 13-onwards):* * * - *Crystal Star Pendant* - *Sommerswerd* - *Silver Helm* - *Dagger of Vashna* - *Silver Bracers* - *Jewelled Mace* - *Silver Bow of Duadon* - *Helshezag* - *Kagonite Chainmail* - *Korlinium Scabbard* We might want to consider adding that to the Game Rules section from Buccaneers onwards base on the special items collected, apart from the Kai Weapon. 3. Section 219 - (near to the end), the results based on the entries are jumbled. Presently, base on the total from RNT (plus 2 with Assimilance): 123 - Death (0) 254 - You lose 1 endurance point. (1 to 3) 300 - You lose 3 endurance points (4 to 7) 192 - You lose 2 endurance points (8 or higher) Should be in order: 123, 300, 192, 254. Thanks and regards, Melvin On Sat, Sep 21, 2013 at 6:35 AM, Jonathan Blake < jonathan.blake@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Let's start the comment period for Vampirium and get this one out the > door. The comment period will end next Friday, 27 September (unless we > find a reason to extend it). > > For anyone not familiar, a comment period is the last stage before we > publish a book. Everyone is invited to check out the book and make > sure it lives up to our high standards. Check it by doing whatever > makes the most sense to you, but if nothing else, play through it once > in the next week and send your feedback to this list. I'm looking > forward to playing 27v. It's been a while. > > I've regenerated and uploaded an up-to-date file for all of our > official formats: > > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/27v/title.htm > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-simple/lw/27v.htm > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml-less-simple/lw/27v/title.htm > > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/svg/lw/27v.svgz > > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/epub/lw/27v.epub > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/mobi/lw/27v.mobi > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/fb2/lw/27v.fb2 > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/lrf/lw/27v.lrf > http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/pdb/lw/27v.pdb > > -- > Jon > > ~~~~~~ > Manage your subscription at //www.freelists.org/list/projectaon > > >