[haiku] Re: Request: Graphic for R1A2 CD
- From: Simon Taylor <simontaylor1@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: haiku@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Mon, 19 Apr 2010 21:20:07 +0100
Jorge G. Mare wrote:
> Here is a rough low-res mockup of the CD artwork updated for R1A2:
>
> http://haikuzone.net/files/temp/2010-04-haiku-r1a2-cd.png
>
> Compared to the R1A1 CD, this mockup has the following changes:
>
> - No OPERATING SYSTEM beneath the logo
> - Glow added to the logo (same as in the new flier)
Good changes IMHO.
> - Version info moved so that the logo could be larger
I think the "alpha 2" print obscures a little too much of the logo, and
the fact that it's the alpha 2 of R1 is maybe not as clear as the
versioning on the R1A1 CD.
> - Non-warranty disclaimer added to the small print
Looks good.
My only real criticism is about consistency of capitalisation and
punctuation. Currently there is
"Installation CD
for Intel-compatible computers"
and
"R1 alpha 2 release
For testing and development only."
I'd change the second to
"R1 Alpha 2 Release
for testing and development only" - that is title-case on the larger
text, and no capitalistion or punctuation on the smaller line
underneath. That would make the Alpha 2 text and the stamp logo
inconsistent though.
Simon
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