Paul, It looks like everyone has suggested all of the appropriate editorial changes. I'd like to add another suggestion, one having more to do with layout and readability, as well as user-friendliness. A tri-fold layout is a much better format for such informational flyers. In addition to looking more professional, they also take up less space at the point of display (and that's important when you are asking a retailer to make them available for distribution). If you would like to prepare a tri-fold layout and send me the finished product, I'll get them printed in the requested quantity (in color, of course). If you'd rather not attempt the imposition necessary for this layout ,I'd be happy to do that given the graphic images as separate files. Or, if you'd rather not change the layout - that's OK too. I'll still take care of the printing. Peter ----- Original Message ----- From: "gene lucas" <geneluca@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> To: <sac-board@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Tuesday, November 21, 2006 2:49 PM Subject: [sac-board] Re: SAC Handout for 2007 Good work, everybody! Couldn't do a better job of editing, myself! Now, how about adding something about 2007 being SAC's 30th year?? Also, please send a note >directly< to Peter Argenziano, as he has been doing great work getting stuff professionally printed for the club. Don't forget to place some copies with Photon Instruments in Mesa, our friends at the >three< astronomy stores in Tucson, and other local places of interest (colleges, libraries, the new GRCO observatory in Gilbert, the AZ Science Center, Challenger Space Center, the >four< other clubs, etc.) We don't care >where< they come from, just as long as they enjoy our meetings! On a related note, perhaps a spruce-up of the web pages is in order for the 30th anniversary year.... Gene Lucas (17250) Paul Dickson wrote: >On Tue, 21 Nov 2006 14:00:06 -0700, Paul Dickson wrote: > > > >>I merged in most of your suggestions. The new printer arrived after I >>posted my original message and I was able to read the handout in a >>different context (meaning printed). >> >> > > > >>The map on page 2 became more readable at 600 dpi than at 300 dpi. >> >> > >I didn't say, but I've uploaded the latest version at 1:40. > >The Contact Info and Educational Events have been rearrange so they fit. >Otherwise the addresses have gaping voids and/or added hyphenation. > > -Paul > > > > >