[lit-ideas] Re: Questions.
- From: John McCreery <john.mccreery@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: Lit-Ideas <lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Thu, 29 Jan 2015 15:18:35 +0900
Personally, I would just drop the second line in the second stanza. I might
also tweak the last line,e.g.,
Shucking corn in October
the softness of cornsilk confuses me
I return to the fields alone
Just piddling,
John
On Thu, Jan 29, 2015 at 1:45 PM, Lawrence Helm <lawrencehelm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
wrote:
> I didn't quite understand the second stanza, but after thinking it over it
> makes sense and I like it a lot more if I change "touch" to "tough". ?????
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> *From:* lit-ideas-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:
> lit-ideas-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] *On Behalf Of *Mike Geary
> *Sent:* Wednesday, January 28, 2015 7:17 PM
> *To:* lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
> *Subject:* [lit-ideas] Re: Questions.
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> I think I thank Robert Paul and Omar Kusturica for their replies. I was
> afraid that JL would reply with a study that begins with Thucydides and I
> would have to spend three days reading his reply and still be none the
> wiser. I'm still none the wiser, but I have two days left.
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> Here's a poem by moi for Lawrence to critique:
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> THE NOT READY FOR PRIME TIME LOVER
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> She pulled her hair across her face
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> and hid there
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> waiting for me to find her.
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> Shucking corn in October,
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> my hands as touch as the husk,
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> the softness of cornsilk confuses me.
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> I came back to the fields alone.
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> Mike
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> On Wed, Jan 28, 2015 at 6:38 PM, Robert Paul <rpaul@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
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> 'Redacted sender,' means the sender is out on bail.
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> 'dmarc-norep,' means the same thing.
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> Robert Paul
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> Mutton College
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> On Wed, Jan 28, 2015 at 3:54 PM, Mike Geary <jejunejesuit.geary2@xxxxxxxxx>
> wrote:
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> What does "dmarc-norep." mean?
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> What does "Redacted sender..." mean?
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