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From: Jan Charvát<ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx>
Date: 14:37:27 on Monday, February 1, 2010
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F (??) 27v 219: [jc: Change the third and fourth choose. It should be 0: 123
(death), 1-3: 300 (-3 EP), 4-7: 192 (-2 EP), 8 or more: 254 (-1 EP).]
E (??) 27v 166: [jc: alter the vertical spacing of the first three rows]
E (??) 27v 47: [jc: This is a bit weird. Maybe sort out the chooses ascending:
0-3, 4-8, 9]
R (??) 27v 286: slip them on over your tunics -> slip them on over (their)
tunics [jc: or is it grammatically correct?]
E (ft) 27v 248: [jc: Should Kai Grandmaster use here 'Sunderer' or 'Andarin
Warhammer' to avoid Kai Weapon CS loss? (sections 46, 122 and 323)]
N (er) 27v 103: you should be part -> you should be parted
E (??) 27v 220: Magnakai healing skills -> Kai healing skills [jc: Standardize
Kai/Magnakai in this book, in sect. 10, 82, 102, 165, 213, 264, 310 and 321.]
F (??) 27v 318: If you have yet to attain this level of Kai rank, -> If you do
not possess this discipline, or have yet to attain this level of Kai rank, [jc:
In section 334, you could use also Grand Pathmanship discipline.]
F (??) 27v 318: If you have attained the Kai rank of Sun Lord, -> If you
possess Grand Huntmastery, and have attained the Kai rank of Sun Lord, [jc: In
section 334, you could use also Grand Pathmanship discipline.]
E (??) 27v 1: and as his young Toranese crew -> and as skyship's young
Toranese crew [jc: I would use 'his crew' only with Banedon.]
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E (??) 28thos 286: after 3,000 years -> after three thousand years [jc: maybe
better]
E (??) 28thos 6: [jc: What if you do not possess a Bow? Can you throw the
Arrow of Atonement at the Autarch?]
E (??) 28thos 137: If you wish to attempt to stop him with your Bow [jc: What
if you do not possess a Bow?]
E (ft) 28thos 200: [jc: If you possess the Kai Weapon 'Valiance', you will
benefit from its unique properties, as Brumalghasts are magical creatures (as
is stated in section 235).]
E (ft) 28thos 267: [jc: Should you also erase one Arrow in favour of the Arrow
of Atonement, if you have 6 Arrows in Quiver (like Zejar-dulaga)?]
E (ft) 28thos 225: [jc: You cannot use your Kai Weapon in this combat (see
section 139).]
E (ft) 28thos 172: [jc: You cannot use your Kai Weapon in this combat (see
section 139).]
E (??) 28thos 265: If you wish to keep The Tome of Tzu, record it on your Action Chart as
a Special Item which you store in your backpack. [jc: Special Items cannot be carried in
the backpack. We should either make it a Backpack Item, or erase "which you store in
your backpack"]
R (??) 28thos 40: you are a safe distance -> you are in a safe distance
E (??) 28thos 148: Javain Bandit [jc: Javai Bandit, or Javaian Bandit]