[projectaon] Re: 26tfobm errata

  • From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Mon, 11 Feb 2013 16:46:04 -0800

On Thu, Feb 7, 2013 at 4:53 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 07/02/2013 00:15, Jonathan Blake wrote:
>>>
>>> (er) 165: [rw: How does the section know you have a Quiver?]
>>
>>
>> Or two Backpack items for that matter. We could add "If you possess
>> them," to the beginning of the sentence (or something better worded)
>> or add a footnote.
>
>
> I really don't want to add a footnote! >_<
>
> But the best I can come up with so far is this (which I've tentatively
> implemented):
>
> (er) your Quiver and -> your Quiver (if you possess this Special Item). Also
> erase
>
> (er) list of Backpack Items -> list of Backpack Items (if you possess any).
>
> Does that sufficiently cover the instance of possessing just 1 Backpack
> Item? It isn't ambiguous that if you possess just one, you lose it, is it??

I think that works fine.

--
Jon

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