[projectaon] Re: 17tdoi Potential Edits
- From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 10 Feb 2012 11:05:52 -0800
On Fri, Feb 10, 2012 at 9:00 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Simplicity itself! <http://www.projectaon.org/staff/simon/errata-2.htm>
Looks great to me. :)
>>> See also:
>>>
>>> <http://www.projectaon.org/staff/simon/footnotz.htm>
>>
>>
>> I must be missing the change you made, but I would suggest either
>> linking directly in the footnote to new Errata section or moving the
>> new Errata section to be immediately after the Introduction.
>
>
> The change is the reduction in the number of footnotes, 40 down to 21. ;-)
> Compare with:
> <http://www.projectaon.org/test/en/xhtml/lw/17tdoi/footnotz.htm>
Oh, sorry. I thought you were demonstrating the footnote in the Grand
Master's Wisdom section relating to the altered combats. It is a nicer
list now.
--
Jon
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