On Sun, Apr 5, 2015 at 9:34 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
wrote:
On 04/04/2015 00:17, Jonathan Blake wrote:noticed
Right, let's get Slaughter Mountain Run out the door. Over the next
week, ending next Thursday, April 9, please take another look at the
book to see if we've missed anything so far. Report back and we'll try
to get it sorted out.
I've been using "Deleted xxx" in the Errata entries for the books. I
that according to the MoS it should be "Removed xxx" instead.
<http://www.projectaon.org/en/Sanctum/ManualOfStyle> I can fix this across
the books if required.
(er) The Story So Far: last day of May, 2020, when -> last day of May2020,
when [so: maybe?]
(er) 1: Although you cannot see them you know exactly -> Although youcannot
see them, you know exactly
(er) 1: Cutter stares at you in silence then, begrudgingly, he nods ->
Cutter stares at you in silence, and then, begrudgingly, he nods
(er) 15, 68, 102, 161, 207, 261: in Ancient Rome -> in ancient Rome
(ne) 80: Ammo Pouch record [so: link to Action Chart]
(er) 102: Add: "(Erase the Bottle of Bourbon from your Action Chart.)"
(er) 104, 156, 258: the Maverick's guns -> the Mavericks' guns
(er) 120: [Add: "(Erase the Leviathan Missile from your Action Chart.
Remember to restore 2 Stealth Points now you are no longer encumbered with
this item.)" Or something similar (cf. query on 328 below). ]
(er) 178: that lay strewn -> that lie strewn
(ne) 178: machine gunning biker -> machine-gunning biker [so: And delete
Errata entry]
(er) 200: lion's head symbol -> lion's-head symbol
(er) 269: long-horned steer skull symbol -> long-horned-steer-skull symbol
[or, long-horned steer-skull symbol]
(er) 201: both of you in some discomfort -> both of you with somediscomfort
(er) 221: ping -> [<onomatopoeia> tags?]
(er) 241: doorway—the rifleman and one other—armed with a -> doorway—the
rifleman, and one other armed with a
(er) 260: having stopped a bullet in his left forearm -> having stopped a
bullet with his left forearm
(er) 260: fetch Sergeant Haskell. -> fetch Sergeant Haskell?
(er) 303: detour of -> detour around [cf. 100, 153, 169, 285, 288]
(er) 315: break you guys -> break, you guys
(er) 316: way out but -> way out, but
(er) 328: Sergeant Haskell and yourself dispatch -> You and Sergeant
Haskell
328: The Leviathan is a Backpack Item (cf. Section 345). Is the -2 StealthItem
penalty an additional -2 on top of the other penalties if it is Item 4,
7, or Item 10? Or does it give a flat -2 penalty to Stealth regardless of
how much else is being carried?
(er) 350: ["Erase the Signal Flare from your Action Chart."]219
[so: Or, add "Erase the Signal Flare from your Action Chart." to 120 and
instead.]
* Regenerate the flowchart SVG so that the small illustration placement
information is correct and up-to-date.
* Jon, do you have a high quality scan of the Rank Scroll for the FWbooks?
I've been vectorising the high quality scans of the illustrations andan
compiling them into a "companion booklet". Whether this is of any use as
accompanying release, or whether it's something only I'm interested in,is
remains to be seen: <http://www.projectaon.org/staff/simon/SMR_Pics.pdf>
(approx 17Mb). The Scroll image is scanned in directly from the book and
therefore of a lower quality than the rest. The Action Chart is based on
Iain's contributed graphics, only with the lettering replaced by actual
type.