E: i like the tone and content of your note. The Board's beleaguered. They need to feel like they're not the enemy. So, fine. A good parargraphy. F On Jun 1, 2014, at 10:25 PM, Erika Zurawski wrote: > What about adding a phrase in the "note" I put add the top that would help to > address that this issue is not about the board, but the information is very > relevant and may be new to them. To throw something out there... > > "Parents have come together feeling disheartened and manipulated, but with a > strong sense that we are not the only ones. We greatly appreciate the time > that the members of the board have taken and will take to make sure all > information lies in the open." > > I don't know if something like that might help. I unfortunately have never > been good at being neutral though, so I don't know how to make that happen. :( > > Erika > > > > On Sun, Jun 1, 2014 at 10:03 PM, Gwyneth Olson <purplepurlgirl@xxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > Erika, > > I'm concerned that this may make the board members feel more defensive. It > all needs to be said and the board needs to know it. I want to say soften the > tone but I'm not sure that I mean it. I'm trying to think of a better phrase. > > Could the information be presented more neutrally? We want to inform them > without making them feel shamed. > > > On Sun, Jun 1, 2014 at 9:46 PM, Erika Zurawski <zura0007@xxxxxxx> wrote: > Hello all, please take some time to help me look over this and provide any > feedback. > > Huge thanks to those of you who took time to share your stories with me. > > Given that the board will have a closed meeting tomorrow night, I would love > to hear from anyone still reading email tonight if they think any changes > need to be made. I would like to make sure the board receives this > information as quickly as possible. > > Thanks everyone for all your hard work and just in general for being so > kick-ass! > > Erika > > > > -- > Gwyneth Olson >