I think this is a good solution. I'm not so good at neutral either. Thank you! On Sun, Jun 1, 2014 at 10:25 PM, Erika Zurawski <zura0007@xxxxxxx> wrote: > What about adding a phrase in the "note" I put add the top that would help > to address that this issue is not about the board, but the information is > very relevant and may be new to them. To throw something out there... > > "Parents have come together feeling disheartened and manipulated, but with > a strong sense that we are not the only ones. We greatly appreciate the > time that the members of the board have taken and will take to make sure > all information lies in the open." > > I don't know if something like that might help. I unfortunately have never > been good at being neutral though, so I don't know how to make that happen. > :( > > Erika > > > > On Sun, Jun 1, 2014 at 10:03 PM, Gwyneth Olson <purplepurlgirl@xxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > >> Erika, >> >> I'm concerned that this may make the board members feel more defensive. >> It all needs to be said and the board needs to know it. I want to say >> soften the tone but I'm not sure that I mean it. I'm trying to think of a >> better phrase. >> >> Could the information be presented more neutrally? We want to inform them >> without making them feel shamed. >> >> >> On Sun, Jun 1, 2014 at 9:46 PM, Erika Zurawski <zura0007@xxxxxxx> wrote: >> >>> Hello all, please take some time to help me look over this and provide >>> any feedback. >>> >>> Huge thanks to those of you who took time to share your stories with me. >>> >>> Given that the board will have a closed meeting tomorrow night, I would >>> love to hear from anyone still reading email tonight if they think any >>> changes need to be made. I would like to make sure the board receives this >>> information as quickly as possible. >>> >>> Thanks everyone for all your hard work and just in general for being so >>> kick-ass! >>> >>> Erika >>> >> >> >> >> -- >> Gwyneth Olson >> > > -- Gwyneth Olson