[survived-dfw] Re: Lonely Photographer needs your help!
- From: "Rohi Shetty" <rohishetty@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: <survived-dfw@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Mon, 8 Dec 2014 07:25:48 +0530
Hi Andree,
Excellent.
I have made a few comments in [ ]:
[Welcome!]
You saw us at the bridal show or saw our advertisement.
And here you are on our website,[delete comma] to see if you can budget for
[check out / choose ] the [special] photography you know you deserve!
[optional - add "on your big day" or something to signify that their wedding
is special. Theme=special photography for special day.]
You can do it! [delete?]
Great news!
I am offering a package that is $1000 below my normal starting rate for any
off-peak wedding.
Is your wedding on an off-peak date? Click here, now, to find out. [delete
both commas]
*Couples with peak wedding dates will get your choice of a free engagement
session or a complimentary Photo Booth. Just mention Real Maine Weddings!
[where? In the subject?]
I hope this helps, Andree. All the best.
much metta,
Rohi
From: survived-dfw-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
[mailto:survived-dfw-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Andree Kehn
Sent: Monday, 08 December, 2014 2:37 AM
To: survived-dfw@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [survived-dfw] Lonely Photographer needs your help!
I'm creating a special for "Wistful Bride". I've got a full page ad in the
Real Maine Wedding magazine and handing out coupons at the bridal show (that
this magazine in distributed at.) I'm fortunate to have the bride and groom
joining me.
Both the ad and the coupon are intended to drive people to a custom landing
page on my website.
I then need to persuade them to fill out my lead generation form. My end
goal is to get on the phone with them. (and then talk them into booking)
I'm imaging a splash page with photo of the couple and then the following
text- what are you thoughts? (this is fleshed out a mini)
You saw us at the bridal show or saw our advertisement.
And here you are on our website, to see if you can budget for the
photography you know you deserve!
You can do it! I am offering a package that is $1000 below my normal
starting rate for any off-peak wedding.
Is your wedding on an off-peak date? Click here, now, to find out.
*Couples with peak wedding dates will get your choice of a free engagement
session or a complimentary Photo Booth. Just mention Real Maine Weddings!
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