[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Tue, 26 Jan 2010 12:02:51 +0000

On 25/01/2010 11:49, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form
    From: Jan Charvát<ch.honza@xxxxxxxxxx>
    Date: 11:49:29 on Monday, January 25, 2010
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(ft) 05sots 154:  [jc: Is the offer really limited to one of each potion? The 
shop should have bigger supplies...]

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Jon or anybody else: What's your view on this? Personally, from a gameplay perspective, I think the footnote is correct, but I have a track record of being wrong, so let's get some input. ;-) 


[jc: Sections 56, 117 and 298 are somewhat nonsensical. I suggest the following changes: As 
sections 117 and 298 show different coin sides, the sentence "With your advanced skills it is 
easy for you to sense immediately that the coin is showing heads, but Prarg is not so gifted." 
should be deleted from section 56. Also it should be added "'Heads!' says Prarg." in the 
section 117 before the first paragraph (as it is in section 298). Then both sections 117 and 298 
are correct.]
Escalated. We can look at this in detail when we rework Book 15, though these changes sound like a good way to fix things. 

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