[projectaon] Re: 02fotw errata
- From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Tue, 09 Mar 2010 11:37:16 +0000
On 06/03/2010 22:40, Jonathan Blake wrote:
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37: East Bank Walk -> West Bank Walk
[tp: Just a possibility; you are west of the River Dorn at this stage,
though not on its banks. The street doesn't go to the river banks,
either; section 323 strongly implies that it ends and becomes Lookout
Street. I'm not sure what else the street name could be referring to.
A bank of the financial kind?]
86: Westbank Wharf -> Eastbank Wharf
[tp: This one's more certain: the geography clearly indicates that you
are on the east bank of the River Dorn at this stage. While we're at
it, should we standardise X Bank vs. Xbank?]
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These seem reasonable (though I think it's OK to not standardize the X
Bank/Xbank issue) but I would like to hear if someone has objections.
So we're /not/ standardising the X Bank/Xbank names, right? (Bit slow this
morning...)
Also, be aware that the first issue also occurs in Section 148, and the second one also appears in
Section 194. I've updated the Errata page accordingly.
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142, 263: [tp: the red and white passes must be collectable even if
you don't have a backpack. To this end, they could be footnoted as
being non-items, like the forged papers (s.327), or they could just be
Special Items.]
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I forget: is it possible to still not have a Backpack at this point?
If so, then I suggest we make them Special Items.
Will we do this using footnotes, or will we add "(Record the X Pass on your Action Chart as a
Special Item which you keep in your pocket.)" or something similar into the text of the section?
Either way, we should probably also do the following:
(er) 142, 246: white pass -> White Pass
(er) 246, 263: red pass -> Red Pass
There are other occurrences of 'red pass' and 'white pass', but not referring to them as items you
are carrying, so it should be OK to leave those uncapitalised, I think.
--
Simon Osborne
Project Aon
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