Renee deserves a WOW Ribbon for all the CAPS acronyms - that's what I think :) On Tue, Jul 29, 2014 at 8:11 PM, Renée Ostergren <rostergren@xxxxxxx> wrote: > Perfect - many thanks! > > Couldn't > Ask for a > Parent board > Superior to this > > Renée > > On Jul 29, 2014, at 6:19 PM, CAROL CLEAR <carolclear@xxxxxxx> wrote: > > Well done Marlene, thank you. I like Dan's suggestion as well. > > ~Carol > > On Jul 29, 2014, at 4:38 PM, "Lisa Hubert" <dmarc-noreply@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > > Marlene, this is well done! I also like Dan's suggestion. > Thank you for drafting this communication re: volunteer deposits. > And thanks to everyone for a fantastic season and fun party last night!! > > Lisa > > On Jul 29, 2014, at 3:07 PM, Daniel Ostergren <dostergren@xxxxxxx> wrote: > > Hey all, > > Might I suggest substituting "contacted by" rather than "receive > notice"...a slightly softer touch. There may be all sorts of reasons why > people didn't volunteer. Just a thought. I'm good as is too. ~Dan O > > 🌐 > > On Jul 29, 2014, at 2:40 PM, Marlene Hutton <marlene.j.hutton@xxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > > Hi CAPS, > > First of all--thanks to all of you for the work you have put in this year > to make Collindale Swim Team happen! Last night was a great way to close > the season. I am, once again, so impressed with what each of you brings to > this team, as well as your dessert-making skills. :-) > > I am putting together an email for John to send out regarding volunteer > deposits for this year, but I want to run it past you first. Karen, I > will need your input on whether the deadline for getting notice to the > people who have not fulfilled their volunteer requirement is reasonable. > Heidi, I'd like your okay on this wording. All--is there anything I'm > leaving out or phrasing inaccurately? > > "Dear Collindale Families, It was wonderful to see so many of you at > the end-of-season celebration last night! Thank-you for sharing your > summer with us, and for your help in making this a fun and successful swim > season for our children. I still have all of your volunteer deposit > checks. If you would like your check returned directly to you, please > contact me by the end of the day Friday, August 1st, and we will make > arrangements for you to pick your check up either from my home or from the > pool. Otherwise, if I don't hear from you, I will be shredding the checks > during the upcoming weekend of August 2nd-3rd and disposing of them. The > only exception to this would be those few families who have not been able > to fulfill their volunteer requirements this summer. *You will receive > notice from our volunteer coordinator by the end of Thursday, July 31st if > our records show that you have not fulfilled your volunteer requirements. *If > you have any questions, feel free to contact me via email ( > marlene.j.hutton@xxxxxxxxx) or phone (970-372-2188). Once again, thanks > for all of your help!" > > I'm hoping to have John send this out tonight, so I appreciate your prompt > feedback. > > Don't get washed away out there! Carol, I hope you have a great trip, and > best of luck to Carson at Zones.--Marlene > >