Perfect - many thanks! Couldn't Ask for a Parent board Superior to this Renée > On Jul 29, 2014, at 6:19 PM, CAROL CLEAR <carolclear@xxxxxxx> wrote: > > Well done Marlene, thank you. I like Dan's suggestion as well. > > ~Carol > >> On Jul 29, 2014, at 4:38 PM, "Lisa Hubert" <dmarc-noreply@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> >> wrote: >> >> Marlene, this is well done! I also like Dan's suggestion. >> Thank you for drafting this communication re: volunteer deposits. >> And thanks to everyone for a fantastic season and fun party last night!! >> >> Lisa >> >>> On Jul 29, 2014, at 3:07 PM, Daniel Ostergren <dostergren@xxxxxxx> wrote: >>> >>> Hey all, >>> >>> Might I suggest substituting "contacted by" rather than "receive >>> notice"...a slightly softer touch. There may be all sorts of reasons why >>> people didn't volunteer. Just a thought. I'm good as is too. ~Dan O >>> >>> 🌐 >>> >>>> On Jul 29, 2014, at 2:40 PM, Marlene Hutton <marlene.j.hutton@xxxxxxxxx> >>>> wrote: >>>> >>>> Hi CAPS, >>>> >>>> First of all--thanks to all of you for the work you have put in this year >>>> to make Collindale Swim Team happen! Last night was a great way to close >>>> the season. I am, once again, so impressed with what each of you brings >>>> to this team, as well as your dessert-making skills. :-) >>>> >>>> I am putting together an email for John to send out regarding volunteer >>>> deposits for this year, but I want to run it past you first. Karen, I >>>> will need your input on whether the deadline for getting notice to the >>>> people who have not fulfilled their volunteer requirement is reasonable. >>>> Heidi, I'd like your okay on this wording. All--is there anything I'm >>>> leaving out or phrasing inaccurately? >>>> >>>> "Dear Collindale Families, It was wonderful to see so many of you at >>>> the end-of-season celebration last night! Thank-you for sharing your >>>> summer with us, and for your help in making this a fun and successful swim >>>> season for our children. I still have all of your volunteer deposit >>>> checks. If you would like your check returned directly to you, please >>>> contact me by the end of the day Friday, August 1st, and we will make >>>> arrangements for you to pick your check up either from my home or from the >>>> pool. Otherwise, if I don't hear from you, I will be shredding the checks >>>> during the upcoming weekend of August 2nd-3rd and disposing of them. The >>>> only exception to this would be those few families who have not been able >>>> to fulfill their volunteer requirements this summer. You will receive >>>> notice from our volunteer coordinator by the end of Thursday, July 31st if >>>> our records show that you have not fulfilled your volunteer requirements. >>>> If you have any questions, feel free to contact me via email >>>> (marlene.j.hutton@xxxxxxxxx) or phone (970-372-2188). Once again, thanks >>>> for all of your help!" >>>> >>>> I'm hoping to have John send this out tonight, so I appreciate your prompt >>>> feedback. >>>> >>>> Don't get washed away out there! Carol, I hope you have a great trip, and >>>> best of luck to Carson at Zones.--Marlene