[cst_2014_board] Re: Volunteer Deposits

  • From: Renée Ostergren <rostergren@xxxxxxx>
  • To: "cst_2014_board@xxxxxxxxxxxxx" <cst_2014_board@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Tue, 29 Jul 2014 20:11:04 -0600

Perfect - many thanks!

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Renée
 
> On Jul 29, 2014, at 6:19 PM, CAROL CLEAR <carolclear@xxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> Well done Marlene, thank you.  I like Dan's suggestion as well. 
> 
> ~Carol
> 
>> On Jul 29, 2014, at 4:38 PM, "Lisa Hubert" <dmarc-noreply@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Marlene, this is well done!  I also like Dan's suggestion.
>> Thank you for drafting this communication re: volunteer deposits.  
>> And thanks to everyone for a fantastic season and fun party last night!!  
>> 
>> Lisa
>> 
>>> On Jul 29, 2014, at 3:07 PM, Daniel Ostergren <dostergren@xxxxxxx> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hey all,
>>> 
>>> Might I suggest substituting "contacted by" rather than "receive 
>>> notice"...a slightly softer touch. There may be all sorts of reasons why 
>>> people didn't volunteer. Just a thought. I'm good as is too. ~Dan O
>>> 
>>> 🌐
>>> 
>>>> On Jul 29, 2014, at 2:40 PM, Marlene Hutton <marlene.j.hutton@xxxxxxxxx> 
>>>> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi CAPS,
>>>> 
>>>> First of all--thanks to all of you for the work you have put in this year 
>>>> to make Collindale Swim Team happen!  Last night was a great way to close 
>>>> the season.  I am, once again, so impressed with what each of you brings 
>>>> to this team, as well as your dessert-making skills.  :-)  
>>>> 
>>>> I am putting together an email for John to send out regarding volunteer 
>>>> deposits for this year, but I want to run it past you  first.  Karen, I 
>>>> will need your input on whether the deadline for getting notice to the 
>>>> people who have not fulfilled their volunteer requirement is reasonable.  
>>>> Heidi, I'd like your okay on this wording.  All--is there anything I'm 
>>>> leaving out or phrasing inaccurately?
>>>> 
>>>>     "Dear Collindale Families,  It was wonderful to see so many of you at 
>>>> the end-of-season celebration last night!  Thank-you for sharing your 
>>>> summer with us, and for your help in making this a fun and successful swim 
>>>> season for our children.  I still have all of your volunteer deposit 
>>>> checks.  If you would like your check returned directly to you, please 
>>>> contact me by the end of the day Friday, August 1st, and we will make 
>>>> arrangements for you to pick your check up either from my home or from the 
>>>> pool.  Otherwise, if I don't hear from you, I will be shredding the checks 
>>>> during the upcoming weekend of August 2nd-3rd and disposing of them.  The 
>>>> only exception to this would be those few families who have not been able 
>>>> to fulfill their volunteer requirements this summer.  You will receive 
>>>> notice from our volunteer coordinator by the end of Thursday, July 31st if 
>>>> our records show that you have not fulfilled your volunteer requirements.  
>>>> If you have any questions, feel free to contact me via email 
>>>> (marlene.j.hutton@xxxxxxxxx) or phone (970-372-2188).  Once again, thanks 
>>>> for all of your help!"
>>>> 
>>>> I'm hoping to have John send this out tonight, so I appreciate your prompt 
>>>> feedback. 
>>>> 
>>>> Don't get washed away out there!  Carol, I hope you have a great trip, and 
>>>> best of luck to Carson at Zones.--Marlene

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