That article can be read here: http://digital.library.wisc.edu/1711.dl/EcoNatRes.pp69n03 Peter C. Gorman Head, University of Wisconsin Digital Collections Center pgorman@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx (608) 265-5291 (Mount Horeb, Dane Co.) On Aug 21, 2012, at 1:18 PM, Bettie R. Harriman wrote: > I think Ted's questions are well stated. Jim Frank tried to answer > some of them in an article he wrote for the Passenger Pigeon a few > years back. The article, called Rare Bird Documentation, appeared in > Vol. 69, No. 3, Fall 2007, pages 349-357. He uses his own experience > of writing up the extrememly rare (for Wisconsin) Yellow-browed > Warbler that he saw in the fall of 2006. > > He gives the step by step process he went through. Give it read. > > Bettie Harriman > Pigeon Editor > > > At 12:47 PM 8/21/2012, Edward Keyel wrote: >> Hi all, >> I think that Ryan brings up a very important point here. Why are written >> descriptions so bad? Or, phrased slightly differently, why are they >> written so poorly? I know that it's certainly something that I struggle >> with, and if photos are better 95ish% of the time, then I'm not the only >> one. Some of the questions I'd like to bring up are what makes for a good >> write-up as well as what makes for being able to make a good write up? Is >> it enough to say that a bird belongs to a given order//family, or should >> those traits be explained as well? How much attention has really been paid >> to the bird itself? Are you learning what the bird actually looks/sounds >> like (be it shape, color, behavior, etc), or are you just recognizing it? >> >> As Ryan mentions, the advantage to photos is that not everyone describes or >> sees things the same way. Photos (or recordings) give the outside >> observer(s) a better connection to the subject matter. We also know that >> photos can be misleading, due to angle, light, behavior, etc, but some of >> that information can be provided as well to help reduce that. I tend to >> try to take photos because I know that my written descriptions are weak. >> Is this a crutch I'm leaning on? >> >> It's easy to look in a book, see what traits are pointed out there, and >> then go ahead and describe those characteristics in a write-up. How does >> one write a reliable write-up, that doesn't sound like it's taken directlly >> from a book (be it because a book was directly used or effectively >> memorized), yet the key points are still addressed? >> >> It seems to me that field notes are enormously important, yet I very rarely >> take them. I'm not sure if it's because I'm too lazy and don't want to >> take that much time to do so, or if I'm too daunted at the vast task of >> attempting to write down a myriad of information about one bird, let alone >> trying to do so for multiple birds. Is my lack of artistic ability such a >> significant handicap because I'm unable to make accurate sketches and may >> not be able to process and absorb color and shape behavior well enough? Is >> my vocabulary also limiting me, because I used choppy instead of snappy? >> >> Are there some sample write-ups available for viewing somewhere? Better >> still, sample write-ups with explanations as to why it is good or bad? >> What are some of the most frustrating phrases? I have to imagine only >> getting information like "good view" or "great light" could be very >> irritating (my apologies for past uses of such simple (for me) and >> frustrating (for the reviewer) descriptions). Some bad descriptions seem >> fairly self-explanatorily bad. Look at page such-and-such in so-and-so's >> book and it looked just like that. Are there others that people seem to >> think are good descriptions that really aren't? >> >> I find that I'm always frustrated when my records are not accepted. >> However, it's not because "the grumble, grumble records committee didn't >> accept my record" or because "the stupid e-bird reviewer hates me," but >> because I couldn't write well enough to convince a group of very >> experienced birders that I saw the bird I claimed. Especially if I had >> "good looks" and "great light", one would hope that I should be able to >> provide the salient points as to why the species is what I say it is, yet >> sometimes that's not always the case. >> >> I suppose that's the beauty of birding though, is that there's always more >> to learn and people to help you learn it. My apologies if this is too >> rambly/incoherent. >> >> Good birding, >> Ted Keyel >> Sun Prairie, >> Dane County >> >> On Tue, Aug 21, 2012 at 10:13 AM, Ryan Brady <ryanbrady10@xxxxxxxxxxx>wrote: >> >>> >>> Sorry Al but photos are better than written descriptions 95-99 times out >>> of 100. Same as seeing the bird in the field? Absolutely not. But >>> conclusive in many, many, many more cases than written descriptions. And >>> the alternative is no photo, which yields zero accountability and little >>> opportunity for anyone to advance on difficult identifications. >>> >>> Sorry for the mini-rant, this is one of my pet peeves. >>> >>> Ryan Brady >>> Washburn, Bayfield County, WI >>> http://www.pbase.com/rbrady >>> >>>> From: alschirmacher@xxxxxxxx >>>> To: wisbirdn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx >>>> Subject: [wisb] Re: Warbler Quiz >>>> Date: Tue, 21 Aug 2012 06:40:15 -0500 >>>> >>>> While I enjoy warbler quizzes (far more than empid quizzes!), this >>> series of photos brings a discussion point to mind: >>>> >>>> * Relying on photos as the ultimate identification tool is nearly as >>> fraught with peril as a written description. >>>> >>>> Yet it is so tempting! >>>> >>>> Al Schirmacher >>>> Columbus, WI temporarily >>>> Princeton, MN again next week >>>> >>>> PS Many thanks to Wisbirders for their recommendations, directions and >>> encouragement during my return to Wisconsin. Had the opportunity to get >>> away on occasion to a variety of spots from Horicon to Madison, resulting >>> in 100+ birds and 30+ butterflies, including a life bird, two state birds >>> and six year birds. Mom passed yesterday, anticipate returning to Minnesota >>> Sunday. >>>> >>>> Special thanks to Peter Fissel, he's a trooper! >>>> >>>> #################### >>>> You received this email because you are subscribed to the Wisconsin >>> Birding Network (Wisbirdn). >>>> To UNSUBSCRIBE or SUBSCRIBE, use the Wisbirdn web interface at: >>> //www.freelists.org/list/wisbirdn >>>> To set DIGEST or VACATION modes, use the Wisbirdn web interface at: >>> //www.freelists.org/list/wisbirdn >>>> Visit Wisbirdn ARCHIVES at: //www.freelists.org/archives/wisbirdn >>>> >>>> #################### >>> You received this email because you are subscribed to the Wisconsin >>> Birding Network (Wisbirdn). >>> To UNSUBSCRIBE or SUBSCRIBE, use the Wisbirdn web interface at: >>> //www.freelists.org/list/wisbirdn >>> To set DIGEST or VACATION modes, use the Wisbirdn web interface at: >>> //www.freelists.org/list/wisbirdn >>> Visit Wisbirdn ARCHIVES at: //www.freelists.org/archives/wisbirdn >>> >>> >>> >> >> >> #################### >> You received this email because you are subscribed to the Wisconsin >> Birding Network (Wisbirdn). >> To UNSUBSCRIBE or SUBSCRIBE, use the Wisbirdn web interface at: >> //www.freelists.org/list/wisbirdn >> To set DIGEST or VACATION modes, use the Wisbirdn web interface at: >> //www.freelists.org/list/wisbirdn >> Visit Wisbirdn ARCHIVES at: //www.freelists.org/archives/wisbirdn > > #################### > You received this email because you are subscribed to the Wisconsin Birding > Network (Wisbirdn). > To UNSUBSCRIBE or SUBSCRIBE, use the Wisbirdn web interface at: > //www.freelists.org/list/wisbirdn > To set DIGEST or VACATION modes, use the Wisbirdn web interface at: > //www.freelists.org/list/wisbirdn > Visit Wisbirdn ARCHIVES at: //www.freelists.org/archives/wisbirdn > > #################### You received this email because you are subscribed to the Wisconsin Birding Network (Wisbirdn). 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