[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission
- From: McSwain LeRoy <simonaamanarfan@xxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2009 20:33:46 -0500
couldn't we amend to?:
'If you took part in the Battle of Cetza and met Captain Prarg there,'
:-)
> Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2009 23:07:23 +0000
> From: outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx
> To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
> Subject: [projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission
>
> On 01/12/2009 20:20, Thomas Wolmer wrote:
> >>> If no one has any complaints about the wording, I'll get these into the
> >>> test
> >>> area tonight or tomorrow morning. Phew!
> >>
> >> If we footnoted them as "Only turn to this section if you personally
> >> commanded a company of men who defended the bridge at the Battle of
> >> Cetza", would that work? I'm working from vague memory here.
> >
> > Well, more like attacked the bridge (or came to the support of those
> > who were attacking the bridge, to be specific). But this is
> > unnecessarily detailed as you either (sooner or later) follow Prince
> > Graygor fighting at the hill, or you fight at the bridge.
> >
> > But do we really need a footnote, can't we just extend the text here
> > with this extra qualifier? "If you took part in the Battle of Cetza
> > and fought with the Lencian knights at the bridge", or somesuch?
>
> But would a normal person remember such a vague detail from five (or even
> seven) books previous? ;-)
>
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> Simon Osborne
> Project Aon
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